Check out the first game that I published:http://www.textadventures.co.uk/review/518/

It's actually the first verision,and you win it if you recieve the security card.This game is a little farfetched,but who cares?

Please tell me how I can improve for the next verision(The Island of Mysteries Beta).

This is what I'm thinking of:(* means I need help with it.)

Character Change feature*
Missions,challenges,mazes,adventures,Quests!
Change your island with a cool ship!
Upgrade things!

If I get a lot of help,then I guess I'll have an aawesome game on my side!
You'll get credits if you tell me an awesome idea.