Our game Zguy and the Z Friends.
It's still a small game but the game has an ending. Textadventures.co.uk look up Zguy and you'll see it. It's first review is 3 stars.
That's our first game so don't think its bad. The 2 Developers are Joe Dell and I. We worked on it in 3 days and worked on it 15-20 minutes per day. We couldn't think of a story idea. We're probably going to make a sequel when this game is fully developed.
If you think our game is bad remember it's our first.

I would say you have the basic bare-bones skeleton for what would be an interesting game if fleshed out. You seem to have worked out how to do things in Quest, which is good. And for a few hours' work, it's a start.

Obviously, as a player I'd want more. For example, when I go to play a game on the ipad, it just says "You play". Not the most rewarding payoff for my effort to navigate things and discover what I can do as a player. After a while, I stopped talking to people, interacting with objects, etc, because it just wasn't worth it - the responses were bare minimum. I'd look forward to seeing what you could do just fleshing out what you have so far. A good start but - do more!

(And I did end up dying - I pulled the lever. )