Hello, This is my first choice book i have made, I know it is short but it is still fun I think in my opinion. Since this didn't take very long to make so part 2 will be out soon. Here is the link to part 1.
Link---> http://textadventures.co.uk/games/view/ ... t-1-school

Also can a moderator categorize mine?

How do you guys like it? Would love if you guys would rate it what you think and what i should ad in part 2 in which endings?

Let me say it this way: it is very short and every sentence start with "You...". I don't want to say more

Pertex wrote:Let me say it this way: it is very short and every sentence start with "You...". I don't want to say more

You can say more, i need more feedback to improve of course its short its my first one i will make sure part 2 is longer, working on in atm