Hi guys, It's me again!
Thanks @Amochure & @jmnevil54 for your reviews in my last thread.
Here is the story without typos and alerts ( website says text is annoying ).
Hopefully the story is long enough for you guys to give proper review.. ;)
P.S. Click on Pokèmon GameBook title if you want to restart.
Charmander's scratch isn't a fire type move, but oooookay....
Anyways, it's good to see you're making a lot of progress!
You're right, scratch is a normal type move. ( I'm not a big fan of pokemon, so i may not remember which move is of which type ).
I'll correct that later and will have a look at bulbapedia.com , to avoid that kind of mistakes in future. :)