I've made my first gamebook and I'm looking for some feedback. I plan on making it mutable parts. there is nothing too major In the game i'm going to change at this time but I am starting my second gamebook and I could use some tips.
link to game: http://textadventures.co.uk/games/view/d7xm0s7pi0knqlswwtx43a/door-chapter-one
Adding a link here might help getting feedback.
I gave it a shot. Found a typo: 'I did not here ...', but that's probably not the sot of feedback you are after.
I found the combination of the simple illustrations with short text nice. What I found annoying (to a degree that it would stop me from reading really) is that I had to scroll down manually on basically every page. It's click, scroll, click, scroll and so on, and that in totally linear parts as well.