I just wanted to put this in a post, so people could find it easier.
Warning: I nitpick.
> x bulb I can't see that. - add "bulb" or call it "light bulb" not "lightbulb" - remove "switch on" from display verbs for the switch - How can I look at the flashlight when it is dark? - When I turn on the flashlight, there is an exit - but no door in the description. And why can I no longer see the switch? - And if I turn off the flashlight, I can still see the room. SECOND ROOM - should be able to examine lightbulb, walls, etc. - for consistency, door should be lower case in the list on the right. Also, remove "Take" display verb. Needs a description too. Is this the door I entered by or not? - Where are the dolls in the room? Some context would help build an image here. - Why can I not take the baby doll? > look at baby doll It starts to bite you! - More description here would be great; is it alive now, etc.? Also, a different message the second time I look. - oh, wait, there is more. I died because I was typing this. - I can still play after dying. Use the "finish" command to terminate the game when the player dies. - death message appears twice - smash baby doll did nothing. I thought because I was dead, so started again, and it still does nothing
Thank you! And the light switch disappears because turning on the flashlight moves you in a different room.