humoristic sci-fi story about tea and spaceships

I'd just like some feedback on my gamebook adventure/work in progress. It's mostly humour, but also some sci-fi. The story is supposedly set in the Victorian era and talks about some guy who can't decide between doing a tea party, popping off into space with his spaceship and going on an adventure in a forest, so you'll have to decide for him.
Golly!
What an amazing plot, isn't it? Anyway, here's the link :
http://textadventures.co.uk/games/view/yyqjqzacm0uhdpc65nmxyw/tea-party-act-1
Also I guess if you're realllllly sensible or get easily butthurt by such subjects as : death, drowning to death, bleeding to death, assassination, frog rains, death by intoxication, house fires, loss of memory, self-inserts, death by banana wrath and evil trees, I should maybe warn you that all of these things are in the story.


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