Flawless by nekoandpie

A simple game, about talking. What topic? You probably might ask while reading this.

Simple

A topic about reality.

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WHEEZE ONE OF THE MY FIRST GAMES SO THIS WILL SUCK--

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Review by DWaM
25 Dec 2016
There are quite a few issues in regards to grammar and sentence structure, which really hurt the experience for me personally. I understand what you were going for, but the impact wasn't as strong as it could've been. The "insults" felt quite bare because at no point did the machine really know who I was nor did he get a chance to, so it never managed to cut deep. At best it felt like a typical "reason you suck speech" (minus the impact, I suppose). And once you put all of that aside, all you're left with is the machine's (or perhaps the creator's) "revelation". I never really felt like it explained its philosophy fully and it just came off as basic nihilism.

In any case, could've been a lot more.
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Review by sergeikat
07 Nov 2016
well done. enjoyable!
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Written for Quest 5.5
Published 15 Nov 2016

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