It wasn't too bad. It had some grammar errors throughout though, and I didn't like that (SPOILER SPOILER SPOILER) if you helped the man, you died, but if you left him, you lived. This seems like it shouldn't have made a difference because the same events happen and you end up unconscious either way, but one kills you and the other doesn't. If you had given a reason for dying when you took the man, then it would be OK, but since you didn't, it hurts the game a little bit. Also, the game felt short, but it is in the Sandpit after all. This game shows promise, but needs a little bit of improvement for the future.