This game could be more fun if:
1. It had better grammar and spelling.
2. It had a wider range of choices effecting outcome.
3. I could have a choice to not do stupid things like talk out loud when I'm trying to be stealthy. That situation with the soldier could so have been avoided if the person I was playing had just kept his thoughts inward.
Also the chick drops her gun. Really? Someone who's been part of the hunting squad for a long time would not have casually dropped her gun.
A good adventure set in the old war stories universe recaptured the dark and broken Earth feeling but in text. There were few errors some English errors and sometimes the atmosphere seems forced but nothing is without a few errors. This feels like a worthy reboot to the old game its not perfect nor near the sense in anyway but its on its way if you give it some updates.
Good job on recapturing the old game and putting it in text, quite hard feat.