The story line was good enough to make up for any small spelling errors or any complaints I had. The choices had hardly any effect and only once would they make the ending change into one of three (one choice for each ending).
I'm a huge fan of text-based games and I've played dozens of them, I can tell that this one isn't anything special, the story is extremely fast paced with many inconsistencies, many times the choices you make result in very small text, and other times you can't even choose. I didn't play all of it, but it was a pretty average to poor game.
If you are a newcomer to this genre (or whatever you wanna call text-based games) then this could be something good to start with. I would not recommend it to experienced players though.
This game was filled with action and some major events with it being really well written. The only thing that kinda bugged me was that you couldn't make more choices; what i mean is when there is only one choice in some there should be another or choices that could make udder conflict or leads you to becoming the king.