I found this game rather interesting. As it is the author's first time writing an interactive story, any mistakes with grammar or capitalization are excusable, and do not really hinder the experience as a whole. My only real problem is that you almost always end up dead, and it could have been more engaging if there were alternate endings. Other than that, I will more than likely play/read the next entry in the series.
First: did you really need to blow up the newsfeed with a 3,356px × 2,304 image? Second: are you and zzGODSKNIFEzz the same person? Third:
Your alarm clock reads 6:00 you better get up and go to work.
You get up... to your left there is a bathroom and to your right there are the stairs.
You go to the bathroom. There is a mirror.
look at mirror
Wow that is one ugly dude... oh wait that`s you... You fall over dead from your uglyness.
...yep, that sure was one EPIC adventure. Such grandeur and heroism, like LOTR and Star Wars and the Odyssee all combined into one.