Enterprise by Sam Write

Review by Andrew Trewin

Ok first of all, there are a few spelling mistakes. And yes, you may think i am crazy for giving this game a 5. So here are my reasons:
1) A game doesn't need to have a story to be enjoyable.
2) The class option is awsome in my opinion.
3) Being able to kill lots of people is fun.

So yeah, you may say im insane, but i have seen NUMERO 0 other games with variables like Charm, Pistol Skill, etc. I found it enjoyable.

Now let the insults attack.

~ AT

Review by Gabriel1

ok...

Review by Auron Dimitri (has returned)

What at first I thought was going to be an interesting game with a solid idea, turned out to be more of an unorganized mess of unfinished ideas that were calling out for a polishing. The game starts off with the questions of gender as well as class, giving you a feeling of a good start- however, you quickly realize that the thoughts put into this game, although of good regard, were executed in a rather messy manner.

As others have said, the spelling and grammar is very poor at various parts of the game- from object descriptions to character descriptions, to simply telling you what room you are in. Although a bit of bad grammar/spelling is easily ignored, this was impossible to just 'let go.'

But spelling is not where this game receives two 'blips.' It is the game's unorganized style and sloppy execution at times that keeps it from being a very good game (because you can see some great intents here). Although it shows promise, the game lacks- it's as if someone wrote a bunch of papers of clever ideas, but then at the end just threw them altogether in a folder and presented them to someone, expecting them to be able to organize it and immediatley make sense of it. Not very likely.

Maneuver is rather difficult and strange, and plot seems thin (or even lacking). For some reason you are on a space ship with the ability to kill any member of your crew (for no apparent reason) and then by pushing a button on accident that causes self destruction, sending you to a strange planet. Again, it reveals the major part where the game lacks, organization.

Giving this game 1 blip however is unecessarily cruel, because effort and good intents are obvious here- however, looking at the sloppy state it is currently in, more than 2 blips would be unreasonable.

2 OUT OF 5

Auron Dimitri (aka Auron Gray)

Review by Steve Lingle

As far as the story goes, this game is probably just a 2.

Yes, there was bad spelling and such, however, after looking at the game in QDK and seeing that at least some amount of thought went into the way it works, I'll give a 3 for effort. I thought it was somewhat creative to be able to choose if you were male or female and what the game thinks when you do choose male or female. This also goes for the choosing of what profession you are. I thought it was a decent effort at using the string variables.

Review by elexxorine

quite good bit lots of spelling mistakes such as "You through your self at him" i would use the spelling 'threw' as in to throw. and seems to have a few bugs the freedom gives makes this game 'good' though. 4 stars (um.. blip thingys) the others seam to have given this game a poor rating because of the maturity in it they were warned....

Review by nokia

I think that's not a good game.

Review by David Whyld

Oh dear god.