When I Grow Up by Questing

Review by BMenSD

I recommend this story for it's many interesting endings, however, it kind of felt all over the place because it never really took the time to explain what was going on. Besides that and a few grammatical errors, it was still overall an entertaining 20-30 minutes.

Review by 2273nate

It's alright a few grammar errors but yeah it reminds me of another game called alter ego.

Grammar: 3/5 a few mistakes here and there and some missing words in sentences.

Story line: 3/5 I felt like I was jumping from place to place. One second I am in a school fighting bullies the next I am traveling in time or whatever but you don't get to experience it really before it pushes you off to the next part of the story where you graduate. It could be good just needs some improvement. It is really creative but maybe a little too unrealistic for the category it's in.

Ending: 4/5 I liked the ending but still could use help.