It started out on a very interesting base. You could have done so much more with this story.
Instead, you have so few choices (actually, you only click on one, because you immediatley can tell what the other one results in). Don't forget you're supposed to make a GAME here, not a linear story.
But I must admit I got a creepy vibe in the end, that you have managed to achieve.
I would encourage you to put more effort into the story, work on this plot point or that, and it'd be a solid horror story.
But like this? Not there yet.
No choices really. Started well with plenty of scope for the storyline but then the writer must have got bored. A bad ending. Sorry but I didn't enjoy this at all.
A CYOA type story but it is very linear so that you don't really have a choice if you want to make it to the end. It would have been just as effective if there were no choices at all.
A somewhat amusing ending and the grammer/spelling is fine but I can't give this more than 2 stars.
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