The Case by smcdon

A young girl finds a suitcase in an antique store, but she is unprepared for what it means for her future and her family.
Review by besasama
04 Mar 2018
The writing was good. I only found one editing error: a sentence that repeated itself. But I was disappointed in how little my decisions changed the story. The essentials of the plot, including the ending, are more or less the same regardless. So it felt a little fatalistic.
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Published 28 Feb 2018

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