Great game! I didn't finish it, but from what I did play it was a great story and I liked the map that gave you an indication of where you were. From all the text adventures I have played, this is one of the best. I have wanted to see a game like this, with a good story and not something slapped together in a day or two like most of these games. I am also working on something similar myself, although it will also be much different. Your game gave me some great ideas and I will probably come back to finish it. Keep it up!
I play TONS of text-based games, but I rarely see anything like this. I didn't even want to play this because it says in the description that it isn't even a game really. But I ended up playing it anyway and it is INCREDIBLE! The wording and the storyline were very intriguing. The only thing I have to say is that maybe change the font a little bit. I didn't think it went well with the story.