This is one Scene out of a much larger story. it was made simply to see how things will work first hand and takes place far after character introductions.
you are welcome to critique but please understand im not a dev, nor do i play text games. comments and advice are appreciated but i dont expect the text adventure game play to stick around. if you can tell me better ways to do what im attempting i would love to hear, such as branching dialogue.
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