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This is my very first text adventure, so I've started with a little chat thing. You chat with my My Little Pony character, Sci-Beam. In the comments I would like to see some tips and advice how I can try to improve and make new stories. These opinions are based on what Sci-Beam's feels about the ponies, not mine. I hope you enjoy!
P.S. In the comments, feel free to suggest topics and additional characters. I feel like if this gets at least 1.5 to 2.5 rating then I might update it.
Go to my DeviantArt to see what Sci-Beam looks like:
My username is SorukinoPokemonY. Go check me out.
Also, I don't really know that much about the Text Adventure Ltd stuff so if there is a problem, then please tell me in the comments.
Updates:
1. Cover Art Picture Uploaded
ATTENTION! DOING A GAMEBOOK IS TOO HARD FOR ME TO DO THE THINGS I WAS REQUESTED LIKE, SCI-BEAM'S HOUSE AND STUFF, SO I AM CURRENTLY MAKING A TEXT ADVENTURE STORY OF IT INSTEAD, STAY TUNED.