Slice of Life
High School Crush
Work in Progress
After a cute girl named Kelly joins Neil's art class, he falls in love with her.
Unknown to him though he's about to get a lot closer to her...
- This in an incomplete story and will likely stay that way as I'm focussing on my art nowadays -
20 Sep 2018
i understand this a wip, but please finish it!
10 Jan 2017
I really like the nervous kid perspective. It makes it more difficult and I can relate to it. Nice setup.
04 Dec 2016
very good starting concept. Needs a bit more free roam as to less dead end choices. Hopefully this is continued and romance insues.
20 Jun 2016
Really could be embellished, it was labeled as "romance" yet it had none.
A good start, now take us somewhere.
14 Apr 2015
It might be a good story, but there's no clear ending.
10 Apr 2015
It has potential... Just NO story. It seems incomplete, just keep working on it, good idea.
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