The Birthday Assignment DEMO by skypioneer

This is the first chapter of my action-oriented text adventure, which I call "The Birthday Assignment" for reasons relevant to the plot.
It's a steampunk set in a typical western movie - or so I'd like to think. Read it yourself, see how it works for you.

This is my first TA game, so I don't expect it to stand up against some of the greater TA's here. But I want some feedback on how I did.

Peace out.

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Review by Happy Grace
02 May 2012
It's alright. Couldn't find Kevin anywhere though? Bit short, but then it is a demo... I can't really make a desicion until I have a go at the full version.
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Review by 100Rads
20 Oct 2011
Great game! Can't wait for the full version!
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Review by MegaZeroX
18 Aug 2011
Amazing! I love how the game is as detailed as a quality novel. I look foward to the full release. However, I do not believe it belongs in the historical section. The fantasy section is more proper (airships were never big because after WWII jets replaced them).
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Review by Ally
10 Jul 2011
I like how you made it, and the theme of it, but sometimes it confused me. Sometimes, I wondered where'd I end up if I went north, or east, or west, or... You get what I mean. Something that could really improve the game (for me, that is) is to explain where each direction goes, preferably right under the room description. But it's a great game, better than anything I've written and better than some (or even most) of the games around here. Good job.
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Review by Stephen Brown
02 Jun 2011
Very well put together in my opinion. Considering this is a demo version I think you may of out done yourself! I liked the menus when talking to characters, it comes in very useful. Speaking of, I liked how you made it so they don't display right off. In my game a menu pops up the moment you click/type "speak to". The only thing is I didn't know you set it up like that at first, because nothing popped up. I figured it out though. This issue is resolved in "The Armaments Store" however, in there, when you speak to the gunsmith at the end it says:
"Push a key to display the shop menu".

Only recommendation is that you might want to add that in the other areas, so that people know to push a key to make the menu appear and then can select their choice.

Again though, very well done especially considering this was a demo.

Stephen
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Written for Quest 4.1
Published 02 Jun 2011

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