Mage's Adventure by zebb9

You are a young mage in a kingdom that is in a bloody war. You are as a commander in the army and must lead your troops to victory of die trying.

I am planning on adding more choices soon I plan on having other jobs available and another quest line in the war. This is my first game so I hope you like it and if you see any grammar or spelling errors please tell me.

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Review by Zorgee
30 Jul 2017
This is not the best, it is very linear in its current state along with some parts that just feel rushed, which I suppose isn't too bad, considering this is a very new game. That is not to say that it's all bad; you have some parts which really do feel like you have consequences, even though those effects aren't particularly dire. There are plenty of grammatical errors, but those can be fixed easily if you send off a copy of it to a friend who is good at English and ask them to proof-read it (and if they're nice they can fix it for you) so that should be fine in the coming future.
You have a seed here - care for it and it'll bloom into something spectacular, if underwhelming so far.

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Added 29 Jul 2017