I appreciated the religious humor here, and the length of play required to complete this gamebook was in fact true to the author's word. (It was short.)
My main concern about God's Day Off was the amount of time I spent reading. I think I made 6 or 7 actual decisions during the course of game play, and I had to read 2 or 3 pages worth of material before I could get there.
Radial, although what appears to be your first attempt at writing was average in my opinion, you definitely have some potential in the gamebook department. I'll be on the lookout, casually, for more material from you in the future.