Everyone seems to have been hard on you, so I'll be a bit nicer :)
It was short, and slightly entertaining. It had a story. I think choosing the wrong option could have had more of an effect on the story. The story was a bit linear. Maybe if you were to make a sequel, you make it a bit more branching.
It was short, but sweet. I noticed one typo > "gaurds" instead of 'guards'. I did dislike the lack of concrete effect that my choices had on the story, even when I chose different options, I would either die or end up at the same location as the other choice two screens later. But, considering it is your first posting and is a homework assignment (high school? post-secondary? Maybe I need to go back to school if programming and IF game are the assignments now.) I thought I it pretty good. I expect you received/ will receive a good grade, especially if you fix that typo!