the great begining by diana malayeri

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This is an awesome story. Please read!!! This is something that i worked really hard on so please read it!!!
Review by Jesse Richardson
25 Jan 2017
"This is an awesome story. Please read!!! This is something that i worked really hard on so please read it!!!"
OK. First of all it isn't an awesome story, but a terribly short and unoriginal story with unfinished choices. Second of all, nobody will read your story because you worked "really hard" on it. Because a) I'm not sure if you worked on it much at all and b) the labor theory of value is a lie. Deal with it.
Good day.
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