Ok, you two need to chill out. It really isn't even that bad. I love using Inklewriter and I'm glad you used it too. Yeah there are some spelling and grammar mistakes but the plot was actually really beautiful. Honestly, I don't think those other two reviewers are friends of the author, but if they are they are right. When you look past the mistakes, the story is really sad, and the twists are kind of shocking.
This was a really interesting story, I really liked it. Keep writing.
There is text speech and even emoticons written in the dialogue. There are several spelling mistakes and the writing is terrible. The plot "twists" are ridiculous. Nothing feels remotely believable or realistic.
Just horrible. The spelling was terrible making it extremely hard to understand. The grammar is not as bad as the spelling, but still pretty horrible. What little you could read was silly and cliched. Also not many, if there ever was any to begin with, "choices". The only saving grace is that it's mercifully short. Unless I got linked to a different game, the other two reviewers are either trying to be funny or are friends/family of the author. 5-star rating game my butt. Don't play this people.