You are in the living room, reading a book next to you is your best friend's daughter, Amy. You are having a short conversation that fit in this short story.
(P.S. I was born in 2006, this is my first story so no harsh comment please)
It is short and simple, but it is understandable. However, you should put more story route because it seems that no matter what you choose, it will lead to the same next paragraph. Keep up the good work, overall it is well made for an eleven years old.