Dragon Spring Chapter 1 by dragonindigo2452

The complete chapter 1 to my new story! I really hope you will enjoy! This is my first ever story. Make sure to follow my Pixton account at: Dragonindigo245!
Review by Io
10 Nov 2018
Decent, and I like a good Dragon story, but needs proofreading; the constant your-you're errors are jarring. Very short, too.
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Published 25 Apr 2018

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