I like it, I noticed that I was a wolf instead of a human which kinda confused me for a minute. Cool game, I'd like to see it finished that way I could see more. Keep going, you're a great writer! I also have a few games, some I'm working on like a re-upload of my game "Detective Winter" ;)
I've tried to get people to play my games to see how I did, but none of them responded. If you can, I'm not begging, but could u try one of my games tho. I just need feedback on whether to continue them
I wish itt was longer and had more options and paragraphs.
I l0ve the game! I've never readd the books but im planning on do so. The game seems so interesting, I think I'll get some books. ty dude ;)
I wish I could choose the career but I cant. It just says Choose career and thats it. No options or anything, I would really also like if you could lower the health. I've tried restarting but its still the same?.. Also I'm playing this on chrome, so if it doesn't work on chrome then :p
Anyways Cool game, I just wish I could play it :/
Too short. You can't see the first part of the word in page 1.
Why would you publish an incomplete game where u can't even start it??
I saw at the first page it said: [email protected]
Remove the "p" to make it a title.
There's not really much of an interactive I was expecting.
I see why this is in sandpit
what's the point of this?
I love this game, I've played it about 7 times in one day.
very little interaction and choices
not even entertaining. Theres literally one or twow choices and u either die from poor weapons or u dont die
It literally just says "Coming soon"
Its good but I wish there want so much country.
The second text is unreadable, and short.
Im writing this as I play lol. OK so, I'm:
Yarrowkit (Blackish brown cat with sharp yellow eyes). I believe it is super good, although instead of writing a whole paragraph on their personalities, you could do [[Beekit]] and continue on with the story, then when they click on beekit, it clicks over to his personality instead of getting confused on other kits.
[[beekit]] <-- Click
Beekit’s one of the coolest gals around. She’s so spunky, every cat envies her.
Just a suggestion :)
Second, this RPG is amazing! Thank you for letting me review it. You could, on the timeskip, do audio that has like a playful tone to it, if you'd like. Grammar and spelling is good. Quite an adventure, can't wait for more!
- 🧸 Here's a problem 🧸
I try every choice and i either die or get left. WHAT A RIP OFF
Short but good~ btw am i a female?
Played it one then froze Wth?
It was short, can u make a prt 2 plsss!
A few errors but its good 🤘🏽
good game, for nerds, altho its kinda boring to me
Im stuck at the “singing” part. It wont let me continue
I can relate to this so much back in public school. We had this microwave the teacher always had in her room, and this guy befor elunch would always ask to use the microwave for ramen.
theres no back button when you do something wrong. -_-