I saw there are some source to fix. You tried to let the player chooce between Read a Letter or Talk to a man in the farm. Oh yeah -SPOILERS- However the two links open themself without any warning.
It lacks of backstory which maybe it was your main wish that the same appears moment by moments like if we had to learn about this guy "The Hunter" in such case sounds great and I love it.
On the other hand, talking about Story and the way it goes I enjoyed most of it and experienced all the possible ends. I hope you make a good project from it but even for an Alpha this was a bit too short. I give you a 3. (OK)
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