Indescribable. Play it when you are alone and have enough time (no more than 20 minutes). It is a somber, serious, beautiful story that is difficult to explain but is beautifully written. The wordplay is phenomenal. Highly recommend.
Very well done. I caught a grammar and spelling mistake but they weren't immediately obvious. I like how Mr Burlap talks completely different, with terrible spelling and grammar. The story was an appropriate length, not too abrupt but not dragging, and I am impressed that failing deductions resulted in deaths that I couldn't undo. I prefer the score system from the first one, though, with a synopsis and grade.
A third story would make an excellent trilogy.