Very much a beginner game. Short, curt, and most of the jokes are stated rather than told. For reference-- don't tell us we changed the channel to Archer; describe a scene from it on the TV, and let the player deduce "Oh! It's an Archer joke! That's funny!"
-Most NPCs were pointless.
-Glad to know our player character is some obese greasy gamer dude. Might have been funny had it been executed a little better (though to your credit, you did "show" us this more than tell us, this time).
-I feel like there was supposed to be a joke with the hippo, but there was no punchline.