Detective

Reviews by Detective

Review for Fire in the School
19 Sep 2020
It is very short. There's not a lot of options because you die in almost every way. I agree with @syxxity, it is a good idea and it does have amazing spelling, it doesn't seem real to me. Teachers do not carry guns in school, nor do they shoot you for dancing around.
(3)

Review for Dictator
14 Sep 2020
First. It is SUPER SHORT. It is very boring and secondly there's not a lot of detail. The words are very hard to see. I recommend you redo this.
(1)

Review for Lynx Tale
30 Aug 2020
Its okay for my part. The grammar is good. It is kind of similar to the Lynx game I am working on, which is one of my originals. The only thing I would wish was a few pictures to describe the environment around 'me'.. Or at least a description of what the territory looks like. Feel free to grab some ideas from other stories including mine, just as long as its not as similar as them. As far as I read the description of this game, it is almost a little bit familiar to my game(s) I've been working on for the past 5 months. I don't mind it at all, I think I can learn more ideas from you. So far it is a good game.
(4)

29 Aug 2020
Um. First of all, this game makes no sense kinda. Like how do you faint after you've taken a swim, just met with a tom cat, etc. ?? Confusing on what this is exactly. I recommend you fix these details to make a lot more sense. It is very short so I wouldn't recommend this to people who hate confusion and short games. This doesnt really fit with the warrior cats at all, even if I havent read it. It does not make sense nor does it fit in properly with romance. Do a better job next time.
(2)

24 May 2020
It's a bit short, but Im assuming theres going to be a Part 4.. Btw my game of part 1 is done lol. Anyway, it's a grate game :)
(4)

Cash me ousside. How bout dat?

It was great btw
(5)

Review for Warrior Cats
06 May 2020
super short, I didn't really like how it started off as darkfeather liking "you". I would like to get to know who he is, in case others haven't read warrior cats.
(3)

Review for Propaganda Pug
08 Apr 2020
Um. Okay, nice.. Like the pug thing.. and the music, music is great. Is this just about pug talking about china?
(4)

Review for Warrior Cat RPG
04 Apr 2020
I LOVE this game! It tells me about everything I need to know before I start the actual game, you have a very detailed description, and I hope u finish it. (no rush)



P.S.
Whut dis boi below is talkin about a squiffy form dont pay any attention to her ⬇︎
(5)

Review for Warrior Cats
01 Apr 2020
The game is really good! I have a massive WIP myself, although it's for school I think I got carried away.. Anyway it's a great game, I just kinda wanted like an option in one of the kits play where you could either play with others or do something independent. Just a suggestion..
(4)

01 Apr 2020
It's good for a 5th grade student! Just some spelling and grammar errors. Also, since this is a squiffy, you could also do the gamebook quest (simple mode) that way the users playing your game can restart to find out the other endings too!.. Furthermore, when you put,

**"???kit, Flamekit and Ashkit please step forward, from this day on until you earn your warrior name you will be know as ???paw, Flamepaw and Ashpaw. ???paw your mentor will be me,..."**

Just as a tip, You don't have to do it: For the passage I pasted above, just to let you know that you could type in blanks: ___kit/paw.

Anyway, I know I typed a lot, it's a great game. Tell me when it's finished :)
(4)

Review for Blackpink
31 Mar 2020
more of a history of how BP started.
(2)

29 Mar 2020
cute yet short. lol
(5)

Review for Let's start a band!
26 Mar 2020
Every ending I've played has the same one. "Your dreams were crushed" I liked it so far, but the endings were annoying because some of them we're the same.
(3)

25 Mar 2020
Yeah i get that its the lyrics. You can add the audio too btw...
(3)

25 Mar 2020
It's a cool game, I love your drawings too! Tell me when its finished uwu.
(4)

25 Mar 2020
I did it. I'm proud.
(3)

24 Mar 2020
I like it so far :)
(5)

Review for Quest Quest
24 Mar 2020
It's a weird game, I like it so far. It's kind of like a puzzle! Right now I'm in the part of the pizza parlor :)
(4)

Review for Sled Dog Stories
22 Mar 2020
I love it. So cool!
(5)

21 Mar 2020
This is amazing! Could u review mine?
http://textadventures.co.uk/games/view/ebbpc4jxweucq9v0ittrmw/moonlight-vs-spikers

its a WIP.
(5)

Review for I Killed The Mouse
21 Mar 2020
Its good. I wish it had options bc right now its like a story.
(4)

21 Mar 2020
This. This is G R E A T N E S S

Also I have a spouse???? oowoo
(3)

21 Mar 2020
Hi. Cool game, I'll tell my bsf about ur games. Again..
(4)

Review for Sara's Lunch
21 Mar 2020
:DD
THE DEFINITION OF F U N
(5)

21 Mar 2020
For the first time, I liked it. Btw sorry for not listening to you, I just now noticed the thing on the annihilation sim. Forgive meh :(
(4)

21 Mar 2020
oOwOo its too shortttt make moreeeeeeee
(3)

Review for An Invitation
20 Mar 2020
[Insert happy face here] I liked it. :)
(4)

20 Mar 2020
Short, but this may be the nicest one out of all ur games.
(3)

Review for *Math Simulator*
20 Mar 2020
5 + 5 = 10 is an equation (which may or may not be true, depending on what you clicked).

5 - 4 = 9 is also an equation (which may or may not be true, depending on what you clicked).

TIPS: Try to use quest gamebook/text adventure. It helps more often with these types of simulators.. Please don't make it like one of my boring math classes. Make it funny, cool, and not boring.
(3)

20 Mar 2020
1. It's uncomplete. 2. It's short. 3. The button won't even start. 4. SUPER BORING.
Please fix your game to make it better.
(2)

Review for The Evil School
20 Mar 2020
um.. short?
(3)

Review for INFECTION
20 Mar 2020
no..nO.nOnOn
(2)

Review for Warrior cats
20 Mar 2020
its a work in progress but i like it.
(4)

Review for Ultimate racing
20 Mar 2020
super short.
(3)

20 Mar 2020
Its short and the game keeps going and going until you get extremely bored and reload the stupid game. N u h u h, n o w a y
(2)

Review for Youtuber's Life
19 Mar 2020
extremely boring after awhile. ur just uploading videos about gaming and vlogs. Also youtubers do much more than work and make videos. They have FUN. and you don't have that.
(2)

Review for I'll wait . . .
19 Mar 2020
AAAAAAAAA, This is so sad!!!! Bestie how could youuu. All ur games are great but mine's gonna be even better that urs! Altho it's short. Still like it doh
(5)

Review for An eventful day
19 Mar 2020
It's short. It's like a puzzle. Kinda like it :)
(2)

Review for who cares
17 Mar 2020
……………………hh
(3)

i-
okay...
(4)

Review for My Best Friend
17 Mar 2020
Short. I'd like to know the backstory
(3)

Review for *Death Simulator*
17 Mar 2020
Its the same game from ur other one. Whats the point of even making a second one???
(1)

17 Mar 2020
Why did u even make the game? Its super short.
(1)

17 Mar 2020
This is a bit like Girl meets world where Riley and Maya meet and do their crazy things together, I like it. I'll give it a 4 star. Idk if you were inspired or even seen the show but its a good show, I've watched it when I was little.
(4)

Review for Criminal Catcher
17 Mar 2020
I don't like how the first part is you HAVE to be a officer, when there is two suggestions and its in your description. I had to take a star off that, secondly could you add a little more sentences cus it gets short and boring. It's kind of pointless to click something over and over again after you've failed..
(3)

17 Mar 2020
Honestly, I thought this would be like one of the shrek movies, but it's not. It's literally short, going on a stupid adventure with a dude named Mr. Owl..
(2)

DUUUUUUUUUDE I love all ur games, theyre so fun.! I could tell ur game was inspired by DetectiveLand uwu. It's a cool game, even tho ur prob discontinuing it bc of school:

I 👏 WANT 👏 MORE👏
(4)

Review for That duck
16 Mar 2020
it's good.
(4)

16 Mar 2020
I agree with my friend, @Here's a Problem, becausse the second passage is unreadable, it's superrrr short.
(1)

16 Mar 2020
I've been waiting for a bit then I realized its from 2017 and now know that'll never finish. RIP
(5)

Review for life as a new wolf
13 Mar 2020
More choices kiddo.
(3)

Review for You're an apple.
13 Mar 2020
This is a cool game, fren.
;)
(4)

Review for The Terrible Tasks
11 Mar 2020
Incomplete, Short, Needs a bit paragraphs instead of just 2 sentences. Not even sentences its like a brief introduction of what "brian" did next.
(2)

Review for the hunt for potato
11 Mar 2020
Short and Incomplete. Had to put a 1 for that.
(1)

11 Mar 2020
coolio indeed
(5)

10 Mar 2020
It's okay but it needs to be more interactive, I would like to have more options to name the kits and try to fight off enemies and such.
(3)

Review for life of a wolf
10 Mar 2020
short as hecc
(2)

Review for Zest
09 Mar 2020
it just says coming soon and a list of depression stuff???
(1)

Its a good game but instead of those LONG paragraphs, maybe press enter 2x after 7 sentences, my eyes hurt.
(4)

Review for Warrior cats
08 Mar 2020
My wifi wa super slow since I was in a new house, but for the game it’s AMAZING! I loved it, It seemed like it was already over but i cant wait to see more of this. Lmk when its finished 💛
(5)


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