Origin of the eyes by 2273nate

I am still working on this so tell me if you like it and I will keep working on it. If you do not like it tell me what you dislike and I will try to fix it.
The story takes place twenty years after the earth has been invaded by aliens from space and after they eliminate the old Government they establish their own corrupt one with new laws that everyone must follow and if you break any of their laws you get one "strike" and after your third you receive no more chances and you are executed on sight. The states have no names anymore instead they are called sectors and sector 11 is where Galen O'Malley and his brother Martin have lived their entire life. Both of their parents were executed when they were young and now they have to survive in the new world all by themselves.