An excellent start but I wish you would not abandon this project because if you add other rooms for example it becomes a really good game like it already is now and nice I just wish you would put at least The possibility of going to mother's room
It's at a good start, maybe let the story play out a little longer, give us more interactions with Mom and Kaitlyn... maybe a some more with the cat too.
Not a bad start. The definitely grammar needs improvement. The content you have for just beginning is solid. Try adding more content, adding some descriptions for the characters, and keep up the good work!