It's at a good start, maybe let the story play out a little longer, give us more interactions with Mom and Kaitlyn... maybe a some more with the cat too.
Not a bad start. The definitely grammar needs improvement. The content you have for just beginning is solid. Try adding more content, adding some descriptions for the characters, and keep up the good work!
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