This my contain things that are 12 and up... like blood. but this is my first one on THIS account so please play. my other account has a defuse the bomb game.
Hello!
I liked your story a lot, the writing is good and it's pretty funny, but I personally think that it's a bit 'deadpan', if you know what I mean. Everything is kinda given to you, and there is nothing for the reader to discover.
Fantasy
Comedy
Horror
Educational
Sci-Fi
Mystery
Puzzle
Simulation
Surreal
RPG
Slice of Life
Historical
Literature
Romance
Seasonal
