I'm sorry, I don't usually give bad reviews, but seriously?! The spelling! And it's just a page of stuff. You can't do anything, apart from read, and it's only one page long! We don't expect a game to end so quickly!!!
Pro tip: This is a website for interactive fiction, otherwise known as textadventures. Fanfiction belongs on fanfiction.net, text based games belong here. At least make a gamebook, not just a giant paragraph with terrible grammar and then publish it.
Also, it's not really a good idea to make "parts" of your games, I've seen a lot of games that do this and it kind of clutters the categories, especially when said games are incredibly short and lack substance.