YOU REALLY SHOULD READ THIS ALL TO KNOW HOW THE MAIN CATS LOOK LIKE
{Intro}
You are a Warrior in River Clan. You are searching for a mate. But the question is; Will you find the love of your life? Or the fake love? And will they betray you? Will they kill you? It's all your choice in this game...
{Your Warrior Cat}
Name: Honey`Flower
Gender: She
Clan: River Clan
Pelt: All different shades of yellow
Personality: You choose
{River Clan}
{Leader}
Minnow`Star, gray and white she with a stub tail that seems to be cut off. His eyes are blueish gray.
{Deputy}
Bark`Fur, tom with many different shades of brown and fur that almost resembles bark. He also has orange eyes.
{Medicine Cat}
Rabbit`Branch, a brownish gray tom with brown streaks that look like branches coming from the sides of his fur with brown eyes.
{Warriors}
Night`Scar, a black she with dark gray dapples and a hideous scar on her eye. Her eyes are brown.
Gorge`Foot, a gray and yellow tom with silver feet and green eyes
APPRENTICE ACORNPAW (Brown tom with a darker brown head)
Owl`Eyes, on the upper part of him is brown while the downer part white. His eyes are yellow.
Bunny`Hop, a brown tom with grayish brownish spots.
Tiger`Ears, a orange she with dark streaks.
APPRENTICE RABBITPAW (Gray she)
Crowblaze, a red and black tom
APPRENTICE MARIGOLDPAW (Yellow and yellowish orange she)
Shreddapple, a senior warrior with a lot of scars. Is red and is a tom
Sunnyblaze, a red and yellow she
{Elders}
Hickoryleaf, a scrawny black tom
Mousestripe, a gray she with darker gray stripes
{Queens}
Ryetalon, red she with long claws
SPOTTEDKIT, MISTYKIT, MEADOWKIT
Cinderflame, a gray she with red flecks on her
LILYKIT, DOVEKIT, DEERKIT
{...}
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I love the creativity of it but I agree with many others, its very short. I don't think you are updating, but I do have advice for other writers, such as myself. Don't have too many choices in the beginning and try to make at the end at least three choices. For example, my story the choices don't really matter that much since you mainly go to the same place but when I finish I'll keep adding and the choices might matter from life to death, love to hate, and warrior to leader/deputy or even a whole new road as a medicine cat!
THIS IS DEFINITELY A WORK IN PROGRESS. But, seriously, you can't say a comment to another cat and then he like you suddenly! MAYBE you could read more of the books?!🙄
I like how there's minimal errors, and the idea itself is original and set out to an audience. The fact that you also wrote out every cat in the game, as well as described them, definitely shows you're committed to this, and didn't describe them in the game and have the reader forget them after a few clicks. I would also like to mention you have personality differs in the responses you are permitted to, which I enjoy. Please work on this more, however! It is, as I agree with other reviewers, rather short. However, I can see how wonderful this might be at the end!