I was amazed at how little action there was. It was too easy. I recommend that there be some really cool adventure here! It is kind of like ... "I get up ... I run ... I jump ... I ran ... I win!" I can understand what you did here. I have the same problems. But, I'd love to fight in some battles, see some action, see some bombs, or something! You should end it with a part that makes people want more! Include some weapons, fights, death, and the good stuff. I am in the process of writing a similar game myself. I still look forward to part two!