All in a day by jonathan_felton

Review by CraftyKat

Not much action in the first ending I got, and it feels incomplete. Still, give it a go!

Review by Odie_da_Bossé

Although I have grudges against cats, I thoroughly enjoyed this. Great detail in your writing. But you didn't quite have enough action at the start - doing this will make the reader alive and want to keep reading, excited for more action. Other than that, everything was really well done. Excited for more!