Captive (Demo) by Caleb howell

Review by Andrew Trewin

All in all, slightly fun :)

but before your characters speak, add these before and after: " "

Like this: "Here take this I dont need it im serving my time in prison."

And also, try to add more full stops.
And add some variables.
This game could become a good game. And make sure it has a good storyline too.

~ AT

Review by Captain Jack Sparrow

Poor details, confusing story and control as well as strange issues with money and weird occurances. Very easy game but difficult to enjoy...

Review by Jakk1

I'm sorry, this game shows nothing for the future. You need to clean it up some, and add some better descriptions. Do this and it'll be a good game.