Predictable, but I suppose writing from "the bad guy"'s point of view is not something you see every day. Awfully short, might have given an okay rating if it had been longer with more details though, maybe then the reader could have more time to get immersed into the story.
The protagonist's intent was already pretty obvious, in my opinion. If the story was longer, perhaps it should have taken a little while longer to slowly reveal her twisted mind. Perhaps then it would have been more of a surprise.
I didn't understand it initially until I read through each choice and found out that the woman keeps taking kids from the street, she crazy. This is really great.
FANTASTIC writing, and a wonderful plot twist I didn't even expect. I really loved it, great job. Only reason I'm rating it a 4 is because it's so short. Good game, though.
You can only really be shocked if you go the bakers street route first (Or whatever it's called), and THEN North Avenue. Otherwise, it's kinda done with one ending. But still good idea.
That was an interesting story. I got to the caleb part first time around and i was confused, but then I tried some other endings and I totally got it. Wow.
I wish everyone would understand how absolutely amazing this little story is simply from the word "wow". Because that's what I kept saying, over and over, after I finished this short intercative game. Wow. What a story.
I'm so impressed with this work, theverbaltypo, geeez. It's so straight to the point, no beating around the bush. Just, bam. You start reading it and in a couple minutes... it's done.
And you're left in your chair, contemplating the screen, asking yourself "why... why is it over already...".
Gosh. Thank you for this injection of "incredibleness".
P.S. If you are reading this but haven't played "Sammy" yet, stop now. Click that nice big green button up there that reads "PLAY" :-)
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