frost mask by snigglefizzles

here is my multiple choice story. enjoy. please rate it and tell me what you think
Review by gameSoul
24 Jun 2017
Simple, easy to follow. Title might not be the best descriptor, grammar needs a little work; consider getting a proofreader. That's not being antagonistic, it's constructive criticism. (Ex. FBI Agent making pills at home? Sounds more like a narcotics producer. Like Breaking Bad.) Also, personal favourite is route 1, 2, 2.

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