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frost mask by snigglefizzles

Literature
here is my multiple choice story. enjoy. please rate it and tell me what you think
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Review by gameSoul
24 Jun 2017
Simple, easy to follow. Title might not be the best descriptor, grammar needs a little work; consider getting a proofreader. That's not being antagonistic, it's constructive criticism. (Ex. FBI Agent making pills at home? Sounds more like a narcotics producer. Like Breaking Bad.) Also, personal favourite is route 1, 2, 2.
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snigglefizzles
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Published 23 Jun 2017
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