I literally came back to this site after so long and basically played all of your games in one sitting. At 4AM.
I'm a fan of what you have going here! Unique, but sprinkled with all sorts of familiar bits from the series. It's a perfect balance.
My only advice is to maybe cut down the length of some of your sentences. I'm no grammar nazi, but sometimes I get lost in all the action you put into just one sentence. Do you plan on making the different choices a bit more unique in the story, or is the main goal the only thing to keep in mind? Merely curious!
Thank you once again for making such an enjoyable little series!