Not half bad! :) It was a bit short, though, and I'd like it if there was more variety- it seems a bit railroaded at the moment. But I'd love to see more.
Beautifully creepy and amazingly detailed. I enjoyed this thing up until the end, at which I began screaming in shock because HOLY RASSILON THAT BIT THOUGH. It reminded me a lot of The Natural History of Fear- which is a good thing. Good job, that was fantastic.