Just like my comment, my review will be similar. If you haven't read it yet, then here it is:
You've done a nice job. I hope the next one comes out soon! The story is similar to AMC's The Walking Dead in a couple of ways such as both characters not remembering anything XD. Of course as you can tell I'm a big fan of the show and seeing something that's similar to it kinda puts me on the judgey state. As for the dialogue, I'd have to say Alex's gritty attitude is kind of amusing to watch. Suspense? Well who could make a horror story without it?! I'd give it and the dialogue 4 stars. I'd give 5 stars for how the story built up. Towards the expansion path, I'll also give it 5 stars. Lastly is my desire for more. Well that would have to be 4 stars.
My Final Verdict
I give this story 4 out of 5 stars.