The writing on this is amazing, with some really detailed descriptions. I especially like the map feature, it's really clear and is a great help to know where you are in the game. The idea of being regenerated instead of being given a game over screen is also quite nice, something that I've also seen in another GTS game.
The only issue that I had is that in the intro there was a white box covering half the screen. It's probably the blank map feature not being able to show anything, but the text is still readable from the bottom. I'm playing it through the website on a computer.
Other than that, fantastic game, and I wish you the best with all future updates!