Reviews by VyxonGaming

Review for Fatal Island Part 1
18 Apr 2016
Good. The element to surprise is key in short stories and this certainly had it.

There are 2 big reasons we have not rated this 5 star. 1 as it is too short and 2 we would recommend you put in the option to go back a page instead of starting from the beginning after death.

Overall we enjoyed this story and we would recommend.