GRAMMAR 2/5 - I just quit after the first few choices. I can't play a game with mistakes unless it is intentional.
LUCK 1/5 - I noticed you find a Mustang in a ditch on the side of the road or something. What luck is this? And why do you automatically steal it?! Because of rain? What has kindergarten become of you!
STORY 1/5 - I like how a little storm causes devastation. lol.
ENDING 1/5 - It exploded? Damn. Oh well. About ten minutes of my life gone. You know, you can't actually live on Mars without food brought from Earth. What'cha gonna do? Eat a rock?
OVERALL 2/5 - Could be better. Just make it more realistic if this happens. And I like how a storm caused you to live on Mars. lol.
MESSAGE TO OTHER REVIEWERS: Don't review if you haven't played. You can ONLY REVIEW ONCE EVERY GAME.
Very short, with a hint of no point. Here come my reviews.
PLOT 1/5 - Game is very short, and thus, very unenjoyable.
COOPERATION 1/5 - Few things. If the number is right or wrong, the machine isn't SUPPOSED to say "YAY" or "No". The game also isn't suppose to say "YOU POOP". This shows the game maker is very unprofessional at what he/she does.
SKILL 3/5 - Good job. At least you know how to do link pages unlike a number of users on here.
OVERALL 1/5 - Very low in point. So bad it's disgusting. But I do know that this is your first game. I look forward to your future games.
Excellent. This game invites the player to portray the minds of the trafficked, while also giving out the information of how much this is an issue in the world. The least to say, fantastic job. This videogame (based on real life) are gratefully given:
Artwork: 5/5
Information: 5/5
Storyline: 5/5
Character Interaction: 4/5