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Review for UNDERTALE -:- WIP -:-

This actually looks like a pretty solid game. The areas are described nicely and it's easy to understand. There are a few things that slightly bother me, though.

1: Lack of saving.
I know it's incomplete, but the player will need to be able to load to get the best ending, assuming they've never played the actual game before. Plus, it's not fun to have to start all over if you died.

2: Lack of actual choices.
I can see why you need to push Napstablook since they're unavoidable, but it's not like buying a donut is vital to the plot, despite making Muffet's fight end prematurely. It's impossible to think of absolutely everything, but being able to backtrack and interact with overworld items (like the signs or flowerbed) would be nice.

3: Frisk is referred to as "lass".
I'm not trying to tell you how the characters must be seen, but if you're trying to stay true to what's canon, they're never gendered and most of the fandom thinks they're non-binary.

I hope to see more of this in the future! In the meantime, keep up the good work.